The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph compares the proportion of visitors to the UK who attended four various attractions in Bristol between 1980 and 2010.

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, we can see that the

pavilion

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has the highest percentage of tourists of all time,

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pier attraction shows minor figures. In 1980, art

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galleries

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,

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pavilions

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and pier attractions had risen gradually to around 38%, 28% and 15%, respectively,

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festivals had slightly decreased to around 27%. After increasing, the proportion of tourists who attended the art gallery started to decline significantly until 1990, 19%.

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, the

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and festival’s visitors went down moderately.

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, the figures for tourists in the

pavilion

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climbed sharply until 1995 and reached around 48%. After 1995, the proportion of people who visited Brighton attractions had considerable changes.

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the figures for the art gallery and

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dramatically had fallen to 30% and 8% in 2010, the pier patterns had a gradual growth,

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%. The same trend showed festivals had a steady increase, around 25–27% over the 15-year period.