Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a univer¬sity should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own know¬ledge or experience.

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and
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should
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provide has been argued for many years. Some people think that the true function of
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provide
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for their own purpose, but nowadays, more and more people point out that
universities
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should
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provide
graduates with the
knowledge
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and
skills
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according to
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the
workplace
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. The first reason for
universities
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should provide
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knowledge
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and
skill
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is the
students
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’ needs. Obviously,
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most of the
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go to
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purpose
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of
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some
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and
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which could
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them
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the ability to get a job. If a
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does not provide
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knowledge
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and
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, the
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might not get a job and they would be very disappointed.
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, the
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would lose its
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, providing
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and
skills
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needed in the
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makes a
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progress.
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skills
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and information always are initiated in the
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, so
focus¬ing
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focusing
on the needs of the
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the
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could get sound strategies to do research and make it more
mordenization
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modernization
.
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, providing
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knowledge
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and
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skills
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could benefit our country which usually gives
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financial support to
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. Having
these
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knowledge
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and
skills
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,
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are more easy to get a job, and
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can make our
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economy strong. In conclusion, it can be said that providing the
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and
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which the
workplace
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needs is every
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universities’
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basic function.

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introduction
Make sure your introduction is clear and states your opinion directly. The last sentence can be improved to better preview the main points.
main points
When presenting reasons, try to use clearer examples and explanations. Adding specific examples would make your arguments stronger.
grammar
Review your essay for grammar and spelling mistakes. For example, use 'skills' instead of 'sills' and 'modernization' instead of 'mordenization'.
coherence
Use linking words to help connect your ideas. Words like 'firstly', 'secondly', and 'finally' can help improve the flow of your essay.
positive
You clearly express your opinion on the role of universities in your introduction.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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