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The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided table illustrates the
population
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 of 4 different countries: Argentina, Indonesia, Italy, and the Republic of Korea, respectively in the specific three
years
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, 2003, 2025, and 2025.
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,
according to
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 the given information, it can be observed that there were noticeable changes over the
years
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 in each country. The greatest number of the
population
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 in every three
years
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 was in Indonesia. Meanwhile, the Republic of Korea has
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 in those
years
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, and even in 2025 and 2050, the
population
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 remained the same. For Italy, the
population
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 has started to drop over the
years
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.
However
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, in Argentina, the
population
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 started to gradually rise. To start with, Argentina started from the lowest level, which accounts for 34
million
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 human beings in 2003, and 48
million
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 individuals have been reported. In the future, the estimated number is 62
million
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people
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.
Secondly
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, Indınesia performed an increase
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starting from 238
million
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 to 312
million
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people
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at the end
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 of 2050.
On the other hand
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, Italy started with an average number which is 54
million
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; but as the
years
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 go by, there are predictions about the decline in
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 case, with only 45
million
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people
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.
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 but not least, Korea performed
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stable data, especially in 2025 and 2050,
a
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with a
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population
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 of the community with 52
million
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people
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 projected.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, years, million, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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