The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
THE GRAPH COMPARED THE PROPORTION OF AUSTRALIAN EXPORTS FOR FOUR DIFFERENT COUNTRIES BETWEEN 1990 TO 2012.
OVERALL
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WE CAN SEE THAT CHINA IS BY FAR THE HIGHEST COUNTRY TO RECEIVE FROM AUSTRALIA,
ON THE OTHER HAND
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, INDIA IS THE LOWEST BUT NOTICED A SIGNIFICANT INCREASE IN THE
LAST
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FEW YEARS. STARTING WITH JAPAN AND CHINA, FROM THE YEAR 1990 TO AROUND 2008 CHINA FACED ADRAMATIC RISE WITH 30 PER CENT EXPORTS IN THE
LAST
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YEARS,
WHILE
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IN JAPAN THE OPPOSITE HAPPENED , JAPAN FACED A DECLINE IN YEARS 1995 UNTIL THE END OF THE PERIOD WITH APPROXIMATELY 27 PERCENT EXPOTS BEING THE HIGHEST.
HOWEVER
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, AMERICA AND INDIA BEING THE LOWEST AMONG THEM ALL WITH NO EXPORTS FROM AUSTRALIA UNTIL ALMOST THE YEAR 2005 STARTING WITH ONLY 5 PER CENT,
ALSO
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THE US STARTED WITH AROUND 13% AND REMAINED ROUGHLY STABLE FROM 1995 TO 2005 FACED A DECREASE OF 5 PERCENT TILL THE END OF PERIOD.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Line graph
  • Percentage
  • Exports
  • Trend analysis
  • Upward/downward trend
  • Fluctuation
  • Comparison
  • Peak performance
  • Decline
  • Stability
  • Significant
  • Inferred
  • Global events
  • Economic context
  • Reflect
  • Influence
  • Patterns
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