The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the key features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the key features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the key features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The flowchart provides key data about the
process
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of recycling
aluminium
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drink
cans
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.
Overall
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, it is clear from the diagram that the recycling
process
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is a multi-stage, closed-loop
process
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, starting with the
item
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items
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being in the drinks machines and ending with
production
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a production
the production
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of new items .
In addition
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, the first step focuses on the collection and sorting of the materials,
whereas
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, the latter stages involve the actual transformation into new products.
According to
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what is shown the first group of steps involves, taking out the used drink
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from the machines,
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next taking it to the collection centre where they collect them from the trash in bags.
Furthermore
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, the truck driver will take it to the recycling centre where the
process
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will begin. In terms of the
aluminium
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recycling plant,
firstly
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, the
cans
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will be melted down of old
aluminium
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.
Secondly
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, new
aluminium
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is made, and
then
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huge rolls are produced.
Finally
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, new
cans
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are made which can be used by people, which will be added to drink machines and
this
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process
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is endless and useful.

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