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The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Introduction: The bar chart and table illustrate data about the
population
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number
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 in Japan between every five
years
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 from 1950 to 2055. Overview:
Overall
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, the chart compares the different categories (in
million
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 and
percentage
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) of Japan’s
population
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 of 65
years
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 or over in the past, present, and future
years
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.
However
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, the most recent data shows us that the highest
number
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 is less than half of the total
percentage
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. Body 1:
Firstly
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, in 1950, the
percentage
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 of
population
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 was lower than the rest of the
population
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 in the other
years
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 at 4.9% per year and 4.1 in a
million
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.
Secondly
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, by 2005, there was a significant rise in both the total
population
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 and the
number
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 of people aged over 65. The
population
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 reached its peak at 127.8
million
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,
while
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 the
percentage
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 of elderly
population
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 rose to 25.7
million
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, accounting for 20% of the total
population
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. Body 2: In the future, the
population
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 of Japan is expected to decline steadily. By 2035, the total
population
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 is projected to fall to 110
million
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, and
further
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 down to 89.9
million
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 in 2055. Despite
this
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 decline, the
percentage
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 of people aged 65 or over is expected to increase dramatically. In 2035,
this
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 group will present 34% of the total
population
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, and by 2055, it will rise to 41% even though the actual
number
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 will slightly decrease to 36.5
million
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.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, number, years, million, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the seventh paragraph.
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