Write a letter to a friend who is looking for a part time job. Describe a job you have found for him/her including: - What are the duties? - Why do you think it is a good job for him/her? - What does he/she have to do to get it?

Dear Raman, How're you? I've

Correct determiner usage

some

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good news

that

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apply

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I've found a part-time job as a sales representative

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Honda company for you. As you mentioned

last

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month over the phone

that

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apply

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you are looking for a temporary job. Your duties include building

relationship

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relationships

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with

cutomers

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customers

, handling paperwork, and completing targets.

This

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is a great opportunity for you as you've completed a sales training program course. The company

pay

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pays

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apply

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weekly

that

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which

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may help you

in saving

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save

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money for your

tution

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tuition

fees, and buying groceries. You have to apply job either online or drop your resume personally. An interview is

also

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conducted

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being conducted

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manager

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the manager

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next week that you have to attend. Best of luck. Lovingly, Rupinder.

rupindersamrow222Thu May 29 2025

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Make sure to check for spelling errors, such as 'cutomers' which should be 'customers'.

coherence and cohesion

Try to use clear paragraphing to separate different ideas more effectively.

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Add more details about why this job is a great fit for your friend.

positive

Your letter has a friendly tone that is suitable for writing to a friend.

positive

You provided useful information about the job duties.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

116 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

part-time job
duties
responsibilities
skills
interests
suitability
local café
retail
library
customers
organizing
stock management
application process
resume
cover letter
online application
relevant experience
interview preparation
attire
encouragement
support
tailoring application
people skills
passion

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Write a letter to a friend who is looking for a part time job. Describe a job you have found for him/her including: - What are the duties? - Why do you think it is a good job for him/her? - What does he/she have to do to get it?

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Reopening new mining companies on islands can be harmful to the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that student benefits from going to private secondary schools. Others, however, feel that private schools can have a negative effect on society as a whole. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.