the line graph below shows the monetary aid from 4 organizations to developing countaries in 4 different .

the line graph below shows the monetary aid from 4 organizations to developing countaries in 4 different .
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the line graph below shows the monetary aid from 4 organizations to developing countaries in 4 different .
The line graph provides information about the percentage of monetary aid from four
organizations
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to developing countries between 2008 and 2001.
overall
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, In the beginning, the monetary aid from
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A,
B
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,and
C
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rose significantly over the period ,
while
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, the
organization
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had a slight fluctuation and declined gradually ,In the beginning, both
organizations
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B
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and
C
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were
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the highest
ratio
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, but by the
end
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organization
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B
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surpassed
organization
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C
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then
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became the highest rate ,
on the other hand
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,
organization
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A was the lowest ,by the end of the period,
organization
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D became the lowest. In 2008 ,
organizations
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A,
B
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,and
C
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were 0.5% 1.5%, and 1.5% respectively.
organization
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A remained stable from 2009 to 2010 from there it climbed attaining 1% in 2009. the black line had a fluctuation

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words organizations, b, c, organization with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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