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The graph below shows the number of international graduates from UK universities in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. ZHa

The graph below shows the number of international graduates from UK universities in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. ZHa
The given graph the rate of overseas graduates from The United Kingdom over 15-
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15-year
 period from 2000 to 2015. The United is measured by percentage. From an
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it is clear that
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 the chart demonstrates six areas of The UK, a significant popular was Oxford.
Whereas
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, London has the least common in 2000.
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 point recorded in the year 2000 ,
However
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 , in 2015,the rate of international graduates in London was
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triple London in the 2000s, by 2000 , the figures in three cities including Cardiff , Bristol and Bath were under 10 per cent , correspondingly, in 2015s , it reached at below 15 % in Cardiff ,
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 Bath and Bristol have taken an approximately 8 % and 12% respectively. In terms of Oxford , in 2000 it recorded just under 15 %.
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, In the year 2015 hit to highest point to account for exactly 25 % .

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