Success is often measured in terms of how much money somebody has earned. Do you think wealth is a good measure of success? How else could we measure whether somebody is successful or not?

Nowadays, many people have different aspects views of
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. Some believe that
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can often be measured by the amount of money an individual has earned.
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essay will discuss my point of view on how good it is to measure
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with wealth and suggest alternative ways to measure somebody's
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.

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Make sure to clearly explain your point of view in the introduction. You can say whether you agree or disagree with the idea that wealth measures success.
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Add more details and examples to support your ideas. For example, mention how personal happiness or health can also be measures of success.
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Organize your essay in clear paragraphs. Each paragraph should have one main idea. Start with a topic sentence, then explain it.
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Use linking words such as 'firstly', 'next', and 'finally' to connect your ideas and make your essay flow better.
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You have a clear introduction that outlines what the essay will discuss.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
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