The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were abale to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were abale to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

The pie charts illustrate the percentage of different languages French,

Spanish

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, and

German

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that

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collage

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college

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student

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in England can speak

beside

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the

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English between the

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years

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2000 and the year of 2010.

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, the number of students who can speak

Spanish

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in both years was high compared to the others. Where the least

faviourte

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favourite

language in both the two years was

German

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. In 2000, and 2010 the

collage

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college

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student

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students

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who were fluent in

Spanish

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were 30% ,

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and 35

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% respectively which makes it the number one chosen

languge

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language

It is clear that

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students were able to speak other

langues

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languages

other than

Spanish

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, French , or

German

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with a

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percentage

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of 15% in 2000, and 20% in 2010. The

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student

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students

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who didn't speak other than English were reduced from 20% in 2000 to 10% in 2010.

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Student

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Students

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who can speak French were 15% and 10% in 2000 and 2010 . It can be noticed that the

German

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spoken language and the two other spoken languages were

complelety

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completely

the same for 2000 , and 2010 with a percentage of 10. Which makes the

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German

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Germans

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the least wanted.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words spanish, german, student with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

188 words

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The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were abale to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money on other things to benefit the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Schooling is a fundamental right of people, of their financial backgrounds wealthy or poor. agree or disagree

In some schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subjects (e.g literatures), boys tend to choose science subjects (e.g physics). Why do you think this is so? Should this tendency be changed? Do you agree or disagree?