The charts above show the percentage of food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants. Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The charts above show the percentage of food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants. Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts above show the percentage of food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants. Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The aforementioned line and pie graphs represent the percentage of families’ expenditure for eating outside and the number of meals eaten in junk
food
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and sit-down
restaurants
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from 1970 to 2000. In the big picture, it is conspicuous that the proportion of spending on
eat
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at home decreased in the observed periods.
In contrast
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, there was an increasing trend in eating at the two types of
restaurants
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. Turning to the money spent, the highest spending on home cooking was in 1970 at 90% but
this
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had
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continued to
decreased
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by 25% for 20 years.
On the other hand
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,
budget
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the budget
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for eating at
restaurants
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skyrocketed from the lowest proportion (10%) to the most significant percentage of
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food
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the food
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budget at 35% in 2000. Moving to another chart, in 1990, even though both fast
food
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and sit-down
restaurants
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had the same number of visitors at just below 25, the figure for sit-down
restaurants
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was higher than another group.
However
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,
at the end
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of
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the periods
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periods
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period
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, fast
food
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meals surpassed at around 30
at
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in
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the
mid 1980s
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mid-1980s
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and
this
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reached a peak at around 80.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, restaurants with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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