The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
In the bar chart below, the values of one country’s
exports
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in different sectors, namely petroleum
products
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, engineered goods, germs and
jewelry
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jewellery
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, agricultural
products
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and textiles, are shown during 2015 and 2016. In the table, the share of changes in
price
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the price
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of each product
are
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is
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shown compared to
previous
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the previous
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year.
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, the majority of earnings came from petroleum and engineered goods. all of the
products
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experienced an increase in their
exports
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except for germs and
jewelry
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which decreased slightly.
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, petroleum and engineered goods had the highest value of
exports
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with 63
billion
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and 60
billion
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respectively.
by
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2016, the former had grown by 3% and the latter by 8.5%. Agricultural
products
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and textiles both witnessed a growth
by
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0.8% and 15.24% (the biggest share of
growth
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the growth
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of all 5 categories) respectively over the period. In the beginning, germs and
jewelry
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jewellery
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exports
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valued
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were valued
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almost
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at almost
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42
billion
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.
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of the period, it experienced a drop
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5.18% to 40
billion
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, products, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • categories
  • value
  • percentage change
  • compare
  • trends
  • changes
  • chart
  • table
  • overview
  • introduce
  • highlight
  • describe
  • summarize
  • information
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