The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia present and in future.

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gives

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information about the current and forecasted

water

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supply system in Australia. Currently, at

first

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water

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is stored in

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and

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these

dams

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devide

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divide

water

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into two parts, pure

water

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is transferred to the household, factories, shops and cities and

waste

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water

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received from

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dams

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is supplied to

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water

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the water

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treatment

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plant

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. Afterwards,

pured

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pure

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supplied to cities is

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distributed into two parts. on

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hand, all

waste

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water

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is sent to the

water

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treatment

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olant

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plant

and

storm

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water

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transfer

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to the

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, in future,

household

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, factories, shops and

citites

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cities

will not only collect pure

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from

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but

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from the

water

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treatment

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plant

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time

instead

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of sending storm

water

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into

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river

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the river

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, all storm and waste

water

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will be supplied to the

water

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treatment

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plant

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. And there is no use of

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river

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any stage.

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, in future,

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water

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treatment

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plant

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plants

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will perform more tasks;

however

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the river

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river

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rivers

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will not be a part of

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water

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supply system.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, dams, treatment, plant, river with synonyms.

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The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia present and in future.

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