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You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to formal teacher. In your letter: -Give detail of the job -Explain why it is important to you -Suggest what information your teacher could out in the reference.

Dear Mr. Stevens, My name is Tomás Alcaide and I was your student during the second term of 2018
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 Physiology 2 course. I am writing to ask you for some references to add
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 my
job’s
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 application. Since I am pretending a position as
researcher
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 the Excercise Laboratory from U.C.L.A.
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, I could not
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 any better than you to give
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 information to the institution.
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, you may write about the
expirience
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experience
 you had when I worked with you as a pupil in your classes.
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, I think it would be a great idea to attach some of the studies where I was
envolved
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involved
 in that semester. As you can guess,
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tremendous importance
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 me,
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, I would never bother you on
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 topic. On top of that, I hope you can understand that
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 is a huge opportunity to continue developing my career
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. if you could send me the documents before Friday, I
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 be extremely grateful. Yours faithfully, Tomás Alcaide Santamaría.

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to structure your letter with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
task achievement
Add more details on why the job is important for your career.
coherence and cohesion
Check for spelling errors and use of correct words, like 'experience' instead of 'expirience'.
greeting and closing
The letter has a polite greeting and closing, which is very good.
complete response
You clearly state your request for a reference, which is important.
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