The table below shows information about the popluation of new Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The table below shows information about the popluation of new Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below shows information about the popluation of new Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The table illustrates how much of the New Zealand
population
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was between 2011 and 2012. The units are measured in number and categorized by age
group
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.
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,
it is clear that
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the change that occurred wasn't significant enough, but the highest increase was for the older generation. In 2011, the
population
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of the
all ages
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group
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was around 4.3
million
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and witnessed a moderate increase to around 4.4
million
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, so the escalation was below 1%. For people below 15, there were only exactly 898 billion,
then
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dropping slightly to 896 billion, with the percentage drop being around 0,2%. In the next age
group
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, between 15 and 39 years old, it was the biggest
population
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. In 2011, around 1.577
million
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people were in New Zealand. In the next year, it went down a little bit by 3
million
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.  For the second oldest
group
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, there are exactly 1.331
million
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people,
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rising moderately by around 8
million
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. The latest
group
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had an extreme increase, even though the
population
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was the lowest. In the first period, it was only below 600
million
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, and in the
last
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period, the amount rose extremely to almost 600
million
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, so the percentage increment was high, almost 5%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, group, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moderate" was used 2 times.
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