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The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the inhabitant's growth in
India
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 and
China
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 from 2000 to the present year, 2025. It is
also
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 completed with the estimated number of
population
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 up to 2050.
Overall
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, both countries experienced steady rises from 2000 to 2025. After 2025,
China
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's
population
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 is expected to decrease,
while
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 the number of people in
India
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 is still rising. In 2000,
India
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's
population
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 started at 1
billion
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,
whereas
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China
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 had 1.25
billion
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 people. These numbers were rising until 2025. In the present year,
India
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 has around 1.4
billion
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population
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 and there are 1.46
billion
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 people in
China
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. In 2030, both countries are projected to have a similar number of
population
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,
that is
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 about 1.45
billion
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. From 2035 onwards,
India
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 is expected to surpass
China
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, becoming the most populous country. The
population
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 of
India
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 is predicted to increase until its peak of 1.6
billion
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 in 2050. Meanwhile, at the same time,
China
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's
population
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 is projected to slightly decline over the years until it reaches 1.39
billion
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.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words india, china, population, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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