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The given pie charts illustrate the average spending on housing, transport, food, health care and other goods and services in Japan and Malaysia in 2010.

The given pie charts illustrate the average spending on housing, transport, food, health care and other goods and services in Japan and Malaysia in 2010.
The provided pie charts compare moderate annual household outlay in
Japan
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 and
Malaysia
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 in 5 alternative fields.


Overall
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,
Japan
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 prevails in
transport
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, health care and other goods and
services
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while
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Malaysia
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 excels in the housing and food section. In terms of individual regions,
Japan
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 indicated the highest of
transport
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however
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 in
Malaysia
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percentage
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the percentage
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 of housing was the most preferred.

According to
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the
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apply
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Japan
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, Other goods and
services
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 were at the top of the list in terms of the proportion of expenses at 29% closely followed by food,
transport
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 and health care
services
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 with 24%, 20% and 21% respectively. But in 2010 the least
money
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 was dispensed to housing compared with other expenditures.
On the other hand
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,
Malaysia
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 funded the highest quantity of
money
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 to the residential places with 34% followed by Food
also
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 Other goods and
services
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 which were allocated an average
money
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 with 27%and 26%
accordingly
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.
Subsequently
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, an annual turnover of
transport
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 and health care sections demonstrated the lowest amount of
money
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, malaysia, transport, services, money with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average spending
  • housing expenditures
  • transport costs
  • consumption habits
  • health care budget
  • goods and services
  • economic factors
  • cultural influences
  • urban vs rural spending
  • disposable income
  • financial priorities
  • significant discrepancies
  • budget allocation
  • grocery bills
  • comparative analysis
  • fiscal management
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