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The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
The graph above illustrates the rate of
Australia
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's exportation with
Japan
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, The U.S.,
China
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 and
India
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 from 1990 to 2012.
Overall
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,
India
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 and
China
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 had an increase in importation from
Australia
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.
While
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 USA and
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 were gradually decreased. As can be seen, From 1990 to 2005 The majority of imported products from
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 were from
Japan
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 accounting for over 25% to above 15%, yet the lowest Of
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's products was from
India
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 approximately from about 2% to 5%.
Furthermore
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,
China
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's importation from
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 was upward slightly from 1990 to 2000 about under 5% respectively,
then
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 began to rise in the year 2000 from 5% to nearly 30% in 2012. Compared to
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 that gradually declined over the two decades from above 25% to over 15%.
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, The U.S. and
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 shared two times the same rate between 2005 and 2012 about over 5%. In conclusion, in 1990,
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 prevailed over
China
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 and in 2012
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 won over
Japan
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, japan, china, india with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Line graph
  • Percentage
  • Exports
  • Trend analysis
  • Upward/downward trend
  • Fluctuation
  • Comparison
  • Peak performance
  • Decline
  • Stability
  • Significant
  • Inferred
  • Global events
  • Economic context
  • Reflect
  • Influence
  • Patterns
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