The bar chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in Australia, divided into three categories, from 2001- 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in Australia, divided into three categories, from 2001- 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in Australia, divided into three categories, from 2001- 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The purpose of
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report is to provide information about the time using
phonecalls
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phone calls
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in 3 different categories in Australia between 2001 and 2008. A brief overview is that national and international
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apply
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mobiles
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mobile
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calls saw significant
changes
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,
whereas
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local calls
was
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observed
a
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to a
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small
changes
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.
Additionally
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, despite being small
changes
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, local
telephone
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calls were still the most popular.
This
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analysis will begin with the features which had big
changes
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. In relation to national and international
telephone
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calls, the figures
was
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consistently grown from 38 to 61
billion
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calls by 2008.
Similarly
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, the number of
mobiles
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mobile
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calls
was
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apply
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dramatically increased from 2 to 46
billion
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calls by the end of the period. Attention will now turn to the feature which had small
changes
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. In connection with local
telephone
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calls, the number
of
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in
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this
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category
was slightly went
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up from 72
billion
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calls to 90
billion
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calls in 4 years before having a drop to 72
billion
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calls by the end of the timeframe.
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the feature
had a drop
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in the
last
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4 years, the local
telephone
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call
was
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is
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still the most popular phone call in Australia.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words changes, telephone, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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