You had a problem while staying at a hotel and the receptionist was very helpful. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, – describe the problem that you had – explain how the receptionist helped you – suggest ways to prevent the problem from happening again.

Hello dear, I hope

this

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letter finds you well. I am going to introduce an issue that I faced

while

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I was staying in your hotel. First of all, I had

got

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apply

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a problem when I stayed in the hotel. At 1:00 AM I was sleeping,

However

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, there

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was

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a guy who

enter

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entered

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the

room

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so I felt scared and nervous. I went to inform the

reciebtion

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reception

and I

discribe

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described

the problem to them and they

try

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tried

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to solve the issue quickly. The

recebtionist

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receptionist

thought there

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was

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not anyone in the

room

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therefore

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they

give

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gave

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the

room

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to the guy who entered.

Although

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all the receptionists were helpful and they gave me a free

staying

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stay

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at the hotel The

recepitonists

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receptionist

have to check the

room

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before

give

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giving

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it to a guest.

This

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way could help to prevent the problem. Thank you, I am looking forward to hearing back from you. Sincerely Saleh Mohammed

SSaabb23

Jun 15, 2025

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language error

Make sure to check the spelling of words like 'reception' and 'describe'.

structure

Try to use paragraphs properly to separate different ideas.

task response

Explain your problem more clearly to give a better picture to the manager.

greeting and closing

You have a friendly greeting and a polite closing.

task achievement

You showed how the receptionist was helpful, which is good.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

153 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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