The diagrams show how the bee makes honey and the stages in the production of honey. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams show how the bee makes honey and the stages in the production of honey. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and making comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams show how the bee makes honey and the stages in the production of honey. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate the process of production of
honey
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by
bees
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and the demonstration of different steps involved in the procedure.
Overall
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, the
honey
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is made by
bees
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following a series of steps involving six stages
whereas
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the trading industries divide the procedure into five levels starting from removing the
honey
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from the
hive
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and ending at the distribution of the final product. In terms of the
bees
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, the first process starts with the queen bee who produce an egg in a honeycomb which converts into a larva in a period of three days.
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, the larva is kept consistent for a week to enable its full growth. The fourth stage involves the separation of the
hive
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from the
bees
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which takes a time of 21 days.
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, the
bees
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collect nectar from different flowers and at
last
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drop the nectar which is filled with
honey
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in the
hive
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.
On the other hand
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, the workers, known as beekeepers who produce eatable
honey
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undergo a series of steps initialising from the removal of
honeycomb
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the honeycomb
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from the
hive
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which is
then
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transferred to a machine to extract
honey
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. In the next stage, the extracted
honey
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is poured into boiling water to remove impurities. When the cleaning process
complete
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is complete
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the
honey
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is packed in jars for transportation to retailers and warehouses.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words honey, bees, hive with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • foraging
  • nectar
  • proboscis
  • regurgitate
  • worker bees
  • digestion
  • evaporation
  • honeycomb
  • hexagonal wax cells
  • moisture content
  • consistency
  • preserve
  • colony
  • long-term storage
  • food source
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