The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise it.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise it.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise it.
The processes illustrate the production of
cement
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and the following usage of it to produce concrete for
building
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buildings
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. First of all, limestone and clay are mixed in a crusher where they are turned into a powder. Once the powder is made, it undergoes a mixing process in the mixer and
then
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transported to a rotating heater where its temperature rises because of the heater on the bottom of the device. As soon as the product reaches the required temperature, it is transported to a grinder where the
cement
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is produced.
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, the
cement
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is packed into bags and is ready to be used.
The concrete
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Concrete
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production requires
sufficient
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amount of different substances to be mixed. In general, the process contains only 2 main steps. 50 per cent of gravel
,
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and a quarter of sand are mixed in a concrete mixer with 15 per cent of
cement
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and 10 per cent of water. The mixer rotates and,
as a result
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, produces concrete.

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