The charts below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided charts illustrate the variation in

products

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category in one country's exports between 2015 and 2016.

Overall

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, it is evident that the production of petroleum products was the highest in both years.

Additionally

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, the average changes in Textiles rose up to around triple

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the gems and jewellery production.

First

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analysis, Petroleum and engineered products are the highest cost

between

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among

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others

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other

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productions around 70 bi ions. In 2015, it

begins

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with

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

72 words

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