Your organized flight has been canceled. Write a letter to the airline company. You should 1)Complain about the situation 2)Request what you need from them to make a travel insurance claim 3)Suggest what they should do in future situations

Dear sir,

This

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is Scarlett Ge, the VIP customer of your

airline

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. I took

the

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apply

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Flight No.123 yesterday,

however

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, it was

canceled

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cancelled

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after I waited for about one hour in the airport. I

wrote

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am writing

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to complain

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this

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about this

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issue and would like to give you some suggestions. Your

airline

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, as the biggest one in our country, is my priority

choise

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choice

when I plan my business trip.

However

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, I met several

cancels in

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cancellations

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this

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year. Especially

this

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time I planned to attend a very important meeting and

have

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give

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a speech.

But

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However

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as the flight was

canceled

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cancelled

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, I had to send

the

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message to the organizer to change their schedule. It

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has

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very

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the very

a very

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bad impact on my business. Fortunately, I bought the travel insurance. In order to make the claim, I need the

explaination

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explanation

documents from the

airline

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officially. Could you please send it to me by email? My email is [email protected].

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, could I give some suggestions ? I know some issues

happened

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happen

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cannot

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that cannot

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be forecasted. But with some measurements ahead of time, you can provide better service.

for example

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, you can ally with

other

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another airline

other airlines

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airline

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. If your plane cannot take off because of

technical

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a technical

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issue, you can allocate your customers to other planes. I believe if your company do

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a more

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detail

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detailed

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plan, most of the

cancel

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cancer

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could be avoided. It is expected that I can still believe your

airline

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. BR Scarlett Ge

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Task Achievement

Make sure to clearly state your complaint in the beginning. This helps the reader understand your main issue from the start.

Coherence and Cohesion

Try to use clearer connections between ideas. For example, use words like 'first,' 'next,' or 'finally' to guide the reader through your points.

Coherence and Cohesion

Check your punctuation and grammar, especially in question marks and capitalization. It makes your letter look more professional.

Task Achievement

You clearly expressed your feelings as a loyal customer, which adds a personal touch to your letter.

Task Achievement

Your suggestions for improvement show that you care about the service and want to help the airline improve.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

231 words

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