You are about to go on vacation for a month. A friend from another town will come and stay in your apartment. Write a letter to this freind. In your letter . Explain where your freind can get the key to the apartment. Give your friend some instructions about using your apartment. Recommend some places to go

Dear Mr Tai, I am writing a letter to you about
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next month I have
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vacation so
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can not give
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key to my
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for you. My key is in the box before my
apartment
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. I hope you are happy when you live in my
apartment
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. I prepare for you something in the fridge.
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, in the fridge have a lot of ice cream, milk and some beef. I think you will like it because
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know you like sweets and meat. In my
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just have something
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a sofa, a
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time
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fridge and
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don't have a pet. And in your free time, you can go to the park near my
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and you can go to the cinema or eat beef in the restaurant in front of my
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, it is very good. When you live in my
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I hope you feel good. I hope you go to the next time
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will meet you and when you come back to your home, I can put my key in the box. Best regards,

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task achievement
Add a subject line to the letter for better clarity.
coherence and cohesion
Try to organize your thoughts into clear paragraphs; each should focus on one idea.
coherence and cohesion
Use full sentences and correct capitalization, especially at the start of sentences.
task achievement
You included personal touches by mentioning the things in the fridge and local places to go, which makes the letter warm and inviting.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • vacation
  • apartment
  • key
  • stay
  • instructions
  • clean
  • belongings
  • recommend
  • places
  • attractions
  • local
  • grocery
  • store
  • market
  • supplies
  • café
  • neighbor
  • wash
  • machine
  • oven
  • parks
  • museums
  • restaurants
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