The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should * GDP (Gross Domestic Product) is the total value of goods that are made and services that are provided in a country.

The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should * GDP (Gross Domestic Product) is the total value of goods that are made and services that are provided in a country.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should * GDP (Gross Domestic Product) is the total value of goods that are made and services that are provided in a country.
This
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bar chart shows the different
percentage
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percentages
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of
gdp
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GDP
of various European Countries from 2002 to 2012.
It is clear that
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Belgium ,Spain ,Switzerland and Estonia
manteined
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maintained
the spending over the years without any change and
this
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means that
while
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Switzerland constantly
manteinned
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maintained
the highest level
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spending ,Estonia's spending was around 3% from 2002 to 2012 without any change.On the other side ,countries like France and Netherlands went
trought
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through
an impressive change in spending.In
fact
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in
France
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France,
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there was at first an increase from 2002 to 2007
,
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when spending changed from 10% to 11% but
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it diminished again ,reaching the percentage of 9%.In conclusion ,the
Swizterland
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Switzerland
had the highest spending percentage
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Estonia had the lowest .

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Health expenditure
  • GDP (Gross Domestic Product)
  • Percentage increase/decrease
  • Trend
  • Stability
  • Fluctuation
  • Economic factors
  • Healthcare priorities
  • Public spending
  • Comparative analysis
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