The graph below provides the amount of books which were borrowed in four various months in 2014 from four village libraries, with the pie chart indicating the proportion of books that were borrowed over this period.

The graph below provides the amount of books which were borrowed in four various months in 2014 from four village libraries, with the pie chart indicating the proportion of books that were borrowed over this period.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below provides the amount of books which were borrowed in four various months in 2014 from four village libraries, with the pie chart indicating the proportion of books that were borrowed over this period.
The line graph illustrates the number of books which were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four local libraries . From an
overall
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perspective,
it is clear that
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in
September
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there was a substantial rise for the Sutton wood . Another notable trend
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was
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in
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September
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saw a marginal drop
to
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the Ryeslip library. In detail, the west Eaton and Church Mount
they
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have the same trend in
June
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the percentage for both was about 50 ,
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furthermore
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both had a slight increase
on
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September
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with
the
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rate of 150.
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if
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we see the most significant change was to the Sutton wood library in
June
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the ratio was about 250
than
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then
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reached
the
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peak
on
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July,
however
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in August has dropped dramatically but by
September
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rose even more . Another library named Ryeslip from
June
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to
September
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had a considerable decline
which
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the percentage in
June
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was about 300
than
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then
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in
September
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it became 160 percent.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words september, june with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • borrow
  • books
  • month
  • village
  • libraries
  • amount
  • proportion
  • new
  • year
  • people
  • reading
  • number
  • activities
  • increase
  • decrease
  • enjoy
  • weather
  • family
  • time
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