There is an ongoing debate concerning whether children have short
breaks
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year
or one long holiday in Use synonyms
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summer
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stay focused and reduce stress, others assert that a long Fix the agreement mistake
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summer
vacation gives more Use synonyms
time
to travel, relax and focus on other activities. Use synonyms
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essay will examine both Linking Words
perspective
in detail before presenting my personal viewpoint.
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perspectives
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more
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year
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This
is because regular Linking Words
breaks
give concentration and learners easily remember the whole syllabus without losing touch with their studies, which can happen during long Use synonyms
holidays
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Furthermore
, short Linking Words
holidays
help them to relax and reduce stress. Use synonyms
This
means that they are less likely to forget important lessons. Linking Words
For example
, in countries like Japan, schools provide short Linking Words
holidays
every month, so students often perform well and feel less stressed about their Use synonyms
study
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Moreover
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holidays
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convenient
for families. The reason is that they can plan small family trips and spend Add a missing verb
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time
together more often, rather than waiting for a long Use synonyms
summer
vacation.
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On the contrary
, the latter view suggests that long Linking Words
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give them Use synonyms
fully
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chance
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a chance
give
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time
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something
extra skills like singing, swimming etc. out of the classroom. Correct your spelling
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, many older students invest their Linking Words
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break gives life experience and Add an article
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develop
useful skills.
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although
both perspectives offer reasonable arguments, I am inclined to support Linking Words
former
view, Add an article
the former
this
is because getting short Linking Words
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