The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Pie Chart: Graduate Destinations Full-time work: 52% Full-time postgraduate study: 15% Part-time work: 8% Unemployed: 8% Part-time work + postgraduate study: 12% Not known: 5% Table: Salaries After 5 Years by Sector Employment Sector$25,000–49,999$50,000–74,999$75,000–99,999$100,000+ Freelance Consultants5%15%40%40% Government Sector5%15%30%50% Private Companies10%35%25%30%

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Pie Chart: Graduate Destinations Full-time work: 52% Full-time postgraduate study: 15% Part-time work: 8% Unemployed: 8% Part-time work + postgraduate study: 12% Not known: 5% Table: Salaries After 5 Years by Sector Employment Sector$25,000–49,999$50,000–74,999$75,000–99,999$100,000+ Freelance Consultants5%15%40%40% Government Sector5%15%30%50% Private Companies10%35%25%30%
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Pie Chart: Graduate Destinations Full-time work: 52% Full-time postgraduate study: 15% Part-time work: 8% Unemployed: 8% Part-time work + postgraduate study: 12% Not known: 5% Table: Salaries After 5 Years by Sector Employment Sector$25,000–49,999$50,000–74,999$75,000–99,999$100,000+ Freelance Consultants5%15%40%40% Government Sector5%15%30%50% Private Companies10%35%25%30%
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Anthropology
graduates from a certain university after their undergraduate degree was completed. The pay range
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of these graduates is described in the table showing data after five years of work. The majority of the students
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in full-time work.
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of graduates
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higher education and worked part-time.
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, after five years of work
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employees are leading in high
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salary
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the most. Generally speaking, more than half (52%)
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people opted for
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full-time employment
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% of the students worked part-time only, 8% focused completely on post-grad study
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5% chose both post-grad
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part-time job.
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remains
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unemployed. Employees in the 10% private
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sector
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suffering from
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salary
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below 50 thousand, following them are
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freelance
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government
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employees
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each
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salary
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. 80% of the freelance consultants'
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salary
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starts
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from 75
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above 100 thousand
salary
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range. Half of the  government service
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apply
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holder gets more than 100 thousand
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dollars
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words salary with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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