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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter. In your lettersay where you think you left the papersexplain why they are so importanttell the manager what you want him/her to do

Dear manager of the Taj hotel in India I booked your botanical hotel from 13th to 15th March in
room
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 number 23.
Unfortunately
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 after I came back to my
home
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home,
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 I found that I had missed my birth certificate and my passport in the
room
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. Those documents
plays
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play
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 a very important role in my life because I want to send them to where university
that
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where
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 I was recently registered
and
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apply
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, a afraid I will miss the deadline for it. I believe that when I had to give my passport to the hotel
manager
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manager,
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 I forgot to bring
back it
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it back
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,
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 perhaps it may be found under the double bed in the corner of the
room
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. I would like to make a few requests
from
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of
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 you.First of all, I would appreciate it if you ask
housekeeping
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the housekeeping
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 staff if they have
founded
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found
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 my document or not.
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Secondly
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Secondly,
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 I was wondering if you could send it to my address that I address to you when I booked my
room
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 on your website. Thank you for your time and attention.I look forward to hearing from you. yours faithfuly Alireza

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task achievement
Make sure to check grammar and spelling for better clarity.
coherence and cohesion
Use clear paragraphs to separate your ideas more distinctly.
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Try to avoid small mistakes in words to make your letter more professional.
task achievement
You clearly stated the importance of your documents and your requests.
greeting and closing
Your closing was polite, which is good in a formal letter.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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