7 July 2025, The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015.

7 July 2025, The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for 7 July 2025, The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015.
The bar charts present the
proportion
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of the workforce in three different countries in 2005 and 2015, broken down by gender.
Overall
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, the
percentage
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of male employees was higher than that of females in all nations. In terms of Canadian male workers,
although
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the figure had the lowest share among male workers in the other countries in 2005, at just over 60%, it increased slightly to exactly 70%. Meanwhile, the
percentage
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of males working in Sweden accounted for nearly 80% in 2005, making it the highest number compared to other categories.
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, it dropped marginally and recorded an equal
proportion
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with that of Canadian male workers in 2015. There was a steady
percentage
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in the male labour force in South Korea from around 75% to 78%.
On the other hand
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, the
proportion
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of the female labour force in all countries experienced growth. In Canada,
this
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figure grew from 38% to 55%, which was the highest increase relative to the three.
By comparison
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, South Korea had the lowest share in both years,
although
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it showed a small rise from 30% to 35%. In Sweden, similar to its male employees, the opposite sex
also
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represented the largest
proportion
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in 2005, at 45%, and
this
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number climbed by 15
percentage
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points to reach 50%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar charts
  • percentages
  • employment
  • countries
  • 2005
  • 2015
  • trends
  • differences
  • changes
  • men
  • women
  • variations
  • patterns
  • significant
  • observations
  • summarize
  • findings
  • predictions
  • future trends
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