The given table depicts the percentage of individuals who joined
work industry
in both genders from 1993 to 2003 in New Zealand
Looking at the graph from Check wording
the workforce
the
general perspective , it can be noticed that there was Correct article usage
a
an
downward trend in female labourers , with the exception of Correct article usage
a
building
and social services fields . Correct article usage
the building
In addition
, Linking Words
male
workforce Correct article usage
the male
tend
to ignore Agriculture and Correct subject-verb agreement
tends
Buildinng
throughout a decade
In regard to Correct your spelling
Building
female
sector , the figure for service and transport dropped remarkably , from 53% to 36% . Correct article usage
the female
Following
Linking Words
this
trend , the statistics of girls engaging in Linking Words
Manufacturing
Correct article usage
the Manufacturing
field
Use synonyms
was
roughly double in a decade Correct subject-verb agreement
were
Linking Words
while
the proportion of female workers in Punctuation problem
, while
agriculture
Correct article usage
the agriculture
field
slightly dropped by 2% . Use synonyms
In contrast
, there Linking Words
was
no Correct subject-verb agreement
were
female
who Fix the agreement mistake
females
participate
in Wrong verb form
participated
contruscting
work before noticeable 6% of Correct your spelling
construction
female
Fix the agreement mistake
females
participating
Wrong verb form
participated
Linking Words
this
Change preposition
in this
sectors
, Fix the agreement mistake
sector
wheras
there was a gradual rise of 5% in the Correct your spelling
whereas
last
Linking Words
field
In terms of girls’ counterpart , the percentage of males in building work slightly Use synonyms
insignificantly
declined 2% after 10 years , Rephrase
apply
while
Linking Words
this
data in Linking Words
agriculture
sector saw Correct article usage
the agriculture
a
biggest drop of 30% . Correct article usage
the
Moreover
, the proportion of males joining manufacturing was nearly the same , with just 12% . Linking Words
Additionally
, Linking Words
sevices
and transport and business Correct your spelling
services
Use synonyms
field
saw a Fix the agreement mistake
fields
remarkably
climb of 9% and 18% , Replace the word
remarkable
correspondingly
. Rephrase
respectively
Lastly
, there was a roughly twofold increase in the number of male Linking Words
workforce
who contributed to social services from 1993 to 2003Use the right word
workers