The charts illustrate four types of destination including part-time work, voluntary work, further study and unemployment that graduate and postgraduate students did after leaving the university in 2008.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts illustrate four types of destination including part-time work, voluntary work, further study and unemployment that graduate and postgraduate students did after leaving the university in 2008.

The illustrations above display different destination types containing

part time

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part-time

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jobs, voluntary work,

further

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study and

unemployments

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unemployment

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for graduates and postgraduates in the UK.

Overall

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Further

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studies in both charts

acounted

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accounted

for the highest

number

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of students,

while

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voluntary work represented the lowest

number

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of individuals in both

two

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apply

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images. On the one hand, the

number

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of people who did

further

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studies claimed almost 29670 for graduates, but in postgraduate

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studies it

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stayed at the highest

number

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with 2725. For graduates who did part

time

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part-time

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job

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job,

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gained almost 18000

and

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, and

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for

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postgraduates

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postgraduates,

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it dropped sharply to reach 2540

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.

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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

97 words

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The charts illustrate four types of destination including part-time work, voluntary work, further study and unemployment that graduate and postgraduate students did after leaving the university in 2008.

Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The use of phones, tablets, and other devices when people are walking in public is causing concern among many commentators. What dangers may arise when people focus on such devices when walking in the street? How could these problems be reduced?

Some believe governments should spend more money on improving roads and highways, while some think money should be spent improving public transportation, such as buses, trains, and subways. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Should long-term job seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.