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The bar chart below shows the percentage of adults by age group in the UK who used the internet every day in the years 2003-2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of adults by age group in the UK who used the internet every day in the years 2003-2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart compares the proportion of
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 by age group using the
internet
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 every day in the UK and in various years.
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, the
percentage
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 of
adults
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 using the
internet
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 decreased as they got older. As the bar shows, 80% of 16-to 24-year-olds used the
internet
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 in 2003 and 2004.
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, it experienced a slight increase to 90% by 2005.But, the
percentage
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 of
internet
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 use declined to 85% in 2006.The
percentage
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 of
internet
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usage
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 among the 25-44 age group was quite similar at 70% and 72% in 2003 and 2004, respectively.Around 81% of 25-44 year old
adults
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 used the
internet
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 in both 2005 and 2006. The proportion of
internet
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usage
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 among
adults
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 between the ages of 45 and 44 was the lowest at 55% in 2003, followed by an increase to approximately 68% in 2004.But, it experienced a decline to 60% in 2005,
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 it rose to 70% in 2006.The
percentage
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 of
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usage
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among the 56-64 age group increased each year.In 2003, the
percentage
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 of
internet
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usage
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 was 32% and it rose to 40% in 2004, 42% in 2005, and 55% in 2006. Only 5% of people who were 65+ used the
internet
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 in three years in 2003.
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, it showed a significant increase to 20% in 2004, in 2005 and in 2006

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Vocabulary: Replace the words adults, internet, percentage, usage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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