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The graph below shows percentages of types of waste that were recycled in a town between 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows percentages of types of waste that were recycled in a town between 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates
theprecentage
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the percentage
 of types of waste
were
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that were
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 recycled in a town during of period 2000 and 2010.
According to
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 statistics, there are four
sort
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sorts
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 of reused trash in town
plastic
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: plastic
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,
and
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apply
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cans,
and
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apply
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 paper and metal.
Adittionally
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Additionally
,
in
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apply
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 2010
is
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was
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 the
most
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apply
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year
that
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when
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 the
precent
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percentage
if
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of
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 waste is the largest
approximately
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, approximately
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 40
percent
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per cent
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 of pollution items.
Overall
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, the minimum revamped
garbege
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garbage
 village is in 2000 with slightly about 5 per hundred.
Nevertheless
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, all the trash which
demonstrates
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demonstrated
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 in the chart
are
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is
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 fluctuating during
a
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the
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 period
from2000
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from 2000
 to 2010.
Furthermore
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, the metal waste recycling in dramatically
rises
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risen
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 rapidly
while
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 the cans slightly oscillate.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Recycling rates
  • Type of waste
  • Decade
  • Increase / Decrease
  • Trends
  • Fluctuation
  • Comparison
  • Significant change
  • Observation
  • Underlying factors
  • Technological influences
  • Environmental impact
  • Societal influence
  • Waste management policies
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