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The line graph gives information about the usage of Facebook and Twitter in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph gives information about the usage of Facebook and Twitter in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart shows the average
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 each person used two platforms in a week in
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Australia.
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,
it is clear that
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users
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 saw a significant increase at the year 2016.
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Twitter
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had been
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 used more than
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Facebook
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 at first in 2012 and end of 2016.
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users
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 remained dominant, the
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users
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 were growing.
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Facebook
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 had the lowest
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, it experienced a sharp rise, reaching
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30%
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. After that, it remained steady for two years. There was a steady increase in
Facebook
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users
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 from the start to the end of the period.
Twitter
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 had the highest
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. Afterwards, it fell dramatically to 12%. It remained unchanged for two years.
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, it fluctuated wildly, but the trend was upward, reaching 35% in 2016.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words twitter, users, facebook with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • usage
  • information
  • popular
  • users
  • increase
  • growth
  • steady
  • period
  • compare
  • trend
  • dominant
  • platform
  • rise
  • noticeable
  • initial
  • years
  • show
  • data
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