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The bar graph depicts the proportion of men and women consuming five or more portions of fruit and vegetables daily in various age brackets in the UK in 2006.

The bar graph depicts the proportion of men and women consuming five or more portions of fruit and vegetables daily in various age brackets in the UK in 2006.
The bar graph depicts the proportion of
men
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 and
women
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 consuming five or more portions of
fruit
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 and
vegetables
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 daily in various
age
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 brackets in the UK in 2006.
Overall
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, the percentage of
women
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 ate more
fruit
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 and
vegetables
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 than
men
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 across nearly all
age
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groups
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, except the aged 75, where
males
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 and
females
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 were equal. Notably, the figure for the 55-64
age
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group
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 was the highest
consumption
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,
while
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aged
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19
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group 19
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-24 had the lowest one for
both
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groups
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. Regarding younger demographics, the 19-24
age
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group
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 recorded the lowest
consumption
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rates
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 at approximately 15% for
males
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 and 16% for
females
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. The
figures
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 were notably higher for those aged 25-34, reaching around 20% and 23% respectively. Meanwhile, the 35-44 bracket showed
males
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 at approximately 22% and
females
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 at 25%. As for older
age
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groups
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, the 45-54 demographic saw roughly 22% of
males
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 and 27% of
females
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.
Similarly
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, but to a higher extent, can be seen in the
consumption
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 in the 55-64
group
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, which peaked at approximately 33% for
men
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 and 35% for
women
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. Meanwhile,
figures
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 declined for those aged 65-74, dropping to about 27% and 29% respectively.
Finally
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, the oldest
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 aged 75 showed equal
rates
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 of approximately 25% for
both
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 genders.The bar graph depicts the proportion of
men
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 and
women
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 consuming five or more portions of
fruit
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 and
vegetables
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 daily in various
age
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 brackets in the UK in 2006.
Overall
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, the percentage of
women
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 ate more
fruit
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 and
vegetables
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 than
men
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 across nearly all
age
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groups
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, except the aged 75, where
males
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 and
females
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 were equal. Notably, the figure for the 55-64
age
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group
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 was the highest
consumption
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,
while
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 the
aged
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age
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19
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group 19
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-24 had the lowest
one
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for
both
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groups
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. Regarding younger demographics, the 19-24
age
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group
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 recorded the lowest
consumption
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rates
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 at approximately 15% for
males
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 and 16% for
females
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. The
figures
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 were notably higher for those aged 25-34, reaching around 20% and 23% respectively. Meanwhile, the 35-44 bracket showed
males
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 at approximately 22% and
females
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 at 25%. As for older
age
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groups
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, the 45-54 demographic saw roughly 22% of
males
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 and 27% of
females
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.
Similarly
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, but to a higher extent, can be seen in the
consumption
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 in the 55-64
group
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, which peaked at approximately 33% for
men
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 and 35% for
women
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. Meanwhile,
figures
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 declined for those aged 65-74, dropping to about 27% and 29% respectively.
Finally
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, the oldest
group
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 aged 75 showed equal
rates
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 of approximately 25% for
both
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 genders.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally, overall, similarly, while".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, fruit, vegetables, age, groups, males, females, group, consumption, both, rates, figures with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "depicts" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "depicts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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