The diagrams below show the process of making chocolate. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the process of making chocolate. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show the process of making chocolate. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates the
way production
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process
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of
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chocolate
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producing chocolate
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.
Overall
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, the procedure has ten steps to produce a final
chocolate
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, beginning with
riping
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ripening
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red
pots
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pods
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from cacao trees and ending with the production of liquid
chocolate
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.
Initially
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,
this
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type of cocoa  tree can be seen
countries
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in countries
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like America, Indonesia and Africa.
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Then
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Then,
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red pots are harvested
and
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, and
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white cocoa
beans
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are inside them. In the following two stages, white
beans
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are fermented
by
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with
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leaves and spread in
sun
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the sun
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to dry. After that, they are put in large sacks.  
Following
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this
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, they are transported by lorry or train to the factory.
Next,
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the product has been completed
,
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apply
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in the factory.
After
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this
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this,
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this
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the
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stage has been roasted
in
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at
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360 degrees. It continues with roasted
beans
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are
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being
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put in a divider and outer shells
are
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being
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removed
and
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, and
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beans
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are
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being
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crushed.
At the end
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of the process, the inner part of
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beans
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the beans
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pressed
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is pressed
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by a roller. The process ends with liquid
chocolate
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is produced
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apply
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.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words chocolate, beans with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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