the chart below shows the world production output from Asia, Europe, and the rest of the world in different years.

the chart below shows the world production output from Asia, Europe, and the rest of the world in different years.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the chart below shows the world production output from Asia, Europe, and the rest of the world in different years.
The bar chart depicts the change in the global
production
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output from Asia, Europe, and the rest of the world between 1840 and 2000.
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, there was a fluctuation in the
production
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of Asia and Europe,
while
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a
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rising trend
was seen in the rest of the world. Asian
production
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had the highest
production
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at about 50% in 1840, after which it saw a remarkable drop to 20% in 1920.
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, the figure for
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output in Asia witnessed a recovery to 25% in 1960 prior to reaching the top at around 45% in 2000. Regarding the global output in Europe, the number of its
production
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started at 40%, reaching
at
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50% in 1920.
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,
this
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trend plummeted to nearly 38% before ending at approximately 25%. In terms of the rest of the world’s
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, it was the lowest figure at 10% in 1840, which saw a consistent rise to equal Europe’s in 1960, followed by a drop to 32%
at the end
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of the period.

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