The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The three pie charts break down the average
amount
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of
Sodium
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, Saturated fat, and added
sugar
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in 4 different meals eaten in America. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is readily apparent that the most added
sugar
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can be found in snacks,
while
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dinner is the main source of
sodium
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and saturated fat.
In contrast
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, breakfast has the lowest percentage for all three nutrients. Dinner is the saltiest and fattest meal among all the meals listed, containing 43%
sodium
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and 37% saturated fat. 23% of
sugar
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is added to dinner, making it the second sugariest meal. In comparison, snacks contain the highest
amount
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of
sugar
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, with 42%. Fat accounts for 21% of the snack, which is half the
amount
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of added
sugar
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. Lunch tends to be salty and has a lot of fat, with 29% and 26%, respectively. Breakfast
,
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is the healthiest meal, containing the least
amount
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of each nutrient, 14%
sodium
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, and 16% fat and
sugar
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. The
amount
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of
sodium
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used in snacks and breakfast
are
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equal (14%).

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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, sodium, sugar with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • typical meals
  • percentages
  • saturated fats
  • fibers
  • sugars
  • impact
  • average
  • consumption
  • trends
  • breakfast
  • lunch
  • dinner
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • implications
  • balanced diet
  • recommendations
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