69.The line chart below shows the percentage of popualtion aged under 5 years old and aged 65 years old or above in the world since 1950 with projection until 2040. The table below shows the projection of the percentage of population aged 65 and above in 2030 and 2040 in different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph provides key information about the proportion of

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expectant

inhabitants

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mothers

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who are have less five and five

years

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old , and

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people who are +65

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old in three, various countries, over a period of a hundred

years

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, between 1950 and 2040.

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, it is clear from the graph that

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there was notable fluctuation in the lines, the percentages of citizens in Sweden and the USA

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increased by the end of the given period,

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the figures for Japanese society at the beginning decreased gradually.

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what is shown, in 1940 the number of people who lived in the USA and Sweden stood at 9% and 7% approximately and respectively. After twenty

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, the percentages have gone up sharply and suddenly to approximately 10% in 1960,

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for both

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of them. In terms of the population who

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grew

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up in

Japanese

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the Japanese

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community, the figures plummeted dramatically, to exactly 2.5% in 1960.

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in beyond eighty

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, to be specific in 2020, the proportion of citizens in Japan has risen constantly to nearly 8%.