The Charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.

The Charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The Charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.
In the provided pie chart, the Parkway Hotel guests were surveyed for 2 different years
2005
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, 2005
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and 2010 and their rating was determined. The changes and similarities will be compared from the information provided. In the year 2005, 5% customers said that
hotel
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the hotel
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gave them excellent service
but
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, but
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in 2010 it
shoot
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shot
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up to 28% which is almost six times higher.
Similar
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A similar
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trend is visible where the customers rating good has
also
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risen from 14
percent
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per cent
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to 39
percent
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per cent
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nearly
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, nearly
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3
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a 3
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times increase.
However
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,
guests
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guests'
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rating satisfactory in the year 2005
fallen to
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fell
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from 45% to 17%. Nextly, the poor rating has dropped from 21
percent
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per cent
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to 12.
Lastly
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, very poor raters
shrinked
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shrunk
to 4 from 15%.
Overall
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, the trend reported by visitors is
quiet
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quite
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positive because most of
negative
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the negative
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ratings have reduced in the year 2010 in comparison with 2005.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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