The bar chart shows the percentage of people who ste five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The bar chart shows the percentage of people who ste five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart shows the percentage of people who ste five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the
percentage
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of people who ate five portions of vegetables and fruits per day in the UK from 2001 and 2008.
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, from 2001 to
2008
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In 2008
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, the
percentage
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of all people was slightly increased
,
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.
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From 2001 to 2006,
women
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and children were slightly up,
while
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women
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grew, in a short period,
men
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remained at a steady level.
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, from 2004 to 2007,the
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of
men
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rose gradually .In 2001 to
2003
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2003,
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statistics of
men
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and
womenstayed
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women stayed
the same ,
while
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during
this
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period
percentage
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of
women
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grew. From 2004 to 2006 number of
women
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rapidly increased as a
percentage
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of all people ;
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however
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however,
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statistics for
men
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were less than those of
women
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and children. In 2006,
women
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were at their peak ;
after
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this
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year number of
women
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plummeted. And the
percentage
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of
menincreased
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men increased
by more than double , and
also
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the number of children remained the same in 2007 and 2008

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 89%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, women, men with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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