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Some people think that taxation should be kept to a minimum as the money people earn should be theirs to do with as they wish. Others believe that people should pay a significant level of tax in order to support the public services we all depend on. In your view, what is the fairest way to deal with the issue of taxation?

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improve
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 it is a commonly tend to belief that numerous individuals think that taxation should be kept to a minimum. There is
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 argument that many people should pay a significant level of
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 in order to support the
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facilites
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facilities
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This
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 essay will
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analyse
 both points of view and express my opinion. On one hand, many people think that taxation is the reason for
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 financial
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 it
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 them from
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 what many things.
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 can be the most significant factor in
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individual income, so he will not
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 to provide the essential
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person's
 salary is 4000$ per month
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 will be around 1500$
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 will not be able to
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requirments
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requirements
. On
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 hand, people
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 believe should pay a significant level of
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 in order to improve the public service and many
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will lead to
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 a lot of
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facilites
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facilities
 to improve the services.
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, many countries
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depend
 on
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tax
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taxes
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 to develop their services.
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,
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the USA
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 have
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beautiful
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because
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percenatge
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percentage
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take. In conclusion, there is no easy
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 to
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 question. On balance,
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however
,
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 tend to believe that
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 level of
tax
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 to
minimum
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that
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will lead happiness person life and limit of
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facilites
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facilities
 will be useful.

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planning
Plan the essay first. Write 2-3 main ideas for both sides and your view.
structure
Make a short, clear intro that shows your view and a small map of ideas.
grammar
Use short, simple sentences. Check common errors and spell easier words.
content
Give clear, easy examples that relate to tax and public services and explain them.
content
You try to talk about both sides of tax issue.
structure
There is a closing line that shows your view.
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