In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might no be happy to give up using cash?

In the upcoming years, paying by
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may
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an available choice. Most
payment
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may be restricted by MasterCard or mobile phones. In my opinion,
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will not appear since old
people
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prefer
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, and many other
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wouldn't be satisfied giving up their
cash
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because it's safer than other
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. elderly
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found it easier to deal with
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because thats what they used to do for a long time, forcing a new method would expose them to many risks,
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as fraud, old
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are an easy target for many bad individuals in society, since they trust anyone rapidly,
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, they could be ropped by a stranger offered to help them paying with new
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and steal their credit information for bad purposes. The main reason for
people
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to be unhappy with
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desicion is that loosing some of your money in the street would be a lot more safer than loosing your cards or mobile phones, if thiefs reached to
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personal property
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would make the stealing proccess a lot more reasier and safer for them , picking up a small card or phone would not attract anyones' attention compared to taking somebody's money in
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, in the UK thiefs number increased 45% after
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started using mobile
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for holding their money. In conclusion,
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development will not be introduced in the future
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preference
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oldest for their traditional
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, and
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would have a negative impact on individuals' safety.

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Make your main view clear at the start and keep it steady.
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Give more reason and a small example for each point.
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Fix grammar and spell common errors; use correct punctuation.
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End with a short conclusion that repeats your view.
accuracy
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content
Your idea is easy to see and you tell what you think.
content
You talk about safety and cash use, which is a real thing people care about.

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