five months ago, you started renting an apartment on a six-month agreement . you know wish to stay in the apartment for longer than the six montha you originally agreed with the owner. write a letter to the owner of your apartment. in your letter say how long you now want to rent the apartment for; explain why your plans have changed; tell the owner about the problem in the apartment.

Dear Mr Luis,

Thans

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Thanks

for providing me a nice

accomadation

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accommodation

in Vancouver, I have been happy living in your property. There are some new circumstances

in relate

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to my employment

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, so

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that

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apply

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I am writing to ask if I can continue living in the flat for more

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than 6

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months. As I said

last

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time, I came to

Vocouver

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Vancouver

to have a

6 months of

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artificial

intellience

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intelligence

training program, but as of the sixth month, one A.I. exploiting company in

Vocouver

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Vancouver

has offered me a job as a

Chabot

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engeenier

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engineer

Hence

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would like to prolong our renting agreement for

another

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half

one

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year if you approve. Speaking of the apartment, there are some

unpredicted

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unexpected

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issues that may bother you a little. Actually, I have repaired the wardrobe door and cleaned the

strains

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stains

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on the carpet since

moved

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moving

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in. Yet, there seems

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water leaking under the tub in the bathroom, because my

nebeighter

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neighbour

who lives by me has called the building manager and complained that my sewage system

had

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has

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rusluted

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rustled

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his floor

wet

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. I consider that I should let you know the situation in case the manager may consult you

how

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on how

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trickle

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the leaking. Anyway, don't worry, I will do my best being a qualified

tennet

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tenant

. I look forward to your response

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sinecerely

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Sincerely

yimanzhang95

Aug 15, 2025

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grammar

Fix spelling and grammar errors so the message is clear.

content

Be clear about how long you want to stay and why you change your plan; keep the reason simple.

structure

Try to use one idea per paragraph and use polite tone in every part of the note.

tone

Polite opening and closing.

content

You say you want to stay longer.

content

You tell about a problem with the flat.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
29
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

215 words

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