You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and services. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter Give details of your visit to the restaurant Explain the reason for the celebration Say what was good about the food and the services

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to convey my heartfelt

apprication

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appreciation

for the top quality service that was given by your staff at your renowned 'Brar Restaurant' .

Last

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sunday

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Sunday

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, I

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along

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, along

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with my

friends

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friends,

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visited your restaurant

for celebrating

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to celebrate

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one of my

friends

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friends'

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birthady

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birthdays

Beside

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Besides

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this

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, one of my friends recommended us because of the reputation of

the

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apply

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restaurant. The fact is that we thoroughly enjoyed every food. At the start of the meal, four glasses of

juices

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juice

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were ordered by us that seemed fresh.

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, we ordered our meal

inculding

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including

rice pudding, fried chicken, and many more. Everything was not only

delicions

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delicious

but

also

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affordable.

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, the waiter was very friendly and the service was very fast. Once again, I

appricate

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appreciate

your efforts for making our visit wonderful. Yours faithfully, Rupinder Kaur.

rupindersamrow222

Aug 18, 2025

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grammar

Fix spelling and word use. For example 'birthday', 'Sunday', 'including', 'delicious', 'appreciate'.

structure

Make two or three small paragraphs. Each paragraph should cover one idea.

tone

Keep a calm and polite tone all the way.

content

Be clear about the visit and the reason to celebrate, then say what you like about the food and service.

language

Use simple words only and short lines so the reader can read easily.

detail

Check the date you came, what you ate, and the name of the place.

tone

Polite tone throughout the letter.

content

Shows why you came and what you liked.

content

Names the place and keeps a good general flow.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

135 words

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