You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia Write at least 150 word

Dear parents, MY name is

sunita

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and

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am

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have

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currently

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finished my

educantion

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education

in child

devlopment

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development

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also i

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have

an

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apply

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experince

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experience

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teacher

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a teacher

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in pre

school

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preschool

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Australia. I always like to work with

babys

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babies

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seen

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advertisement

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an australian

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australian

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Australian

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magazine for

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care of the child. In the previous

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said

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had

exprence

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experience

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preschool

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.

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can do

houshold

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household

work like preparing

meal

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, reading sessions,

coordinating

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and coordinating

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outdoor activities. I love

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time with children and

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do my best

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our time together fun, healthy and educational.I am that one person who

always

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happy with

studens

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students

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work

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with them.

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few years

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i

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am

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living in

australia

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Australia

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so many days

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take

day

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off and prefer to walk in

garden

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the garden

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aslo

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aslo,

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i

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take part in local

cummunity

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community

activities, meet new people and make new

frinds

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friends

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also

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also,

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love to do swimming,

scating

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skating

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so many

activies

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activities

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my

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home country is not

australia

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Australia

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because

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of

that

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that,

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my

mother

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mother's

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languge

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language

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english

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so

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in my free

time

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time,

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practice

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. In the

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,

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tell you only that it is my request that

contact

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you contact

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me and take

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inteview

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interview

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will

waiting

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for your call.

thank

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you

to

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reading my letter. Thank you , sunita