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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, an make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, an make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration below depicts the building plan of Central Public Library before 2 decades and compares it to the present. 20 years ago.
there
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There
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 was a CDs, Videos and Computer games
section
Use synonyms
 in the upper left corner and opposite to that children's book
section
Use synonyms
 is present.
Reading
Correct article usage
A reading
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room
Use synonyms
 for
Newspaper
Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
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 and Magazines
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
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 present near the entrance
and
Punctuation problem
, and
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 opposite to that Enquiry desk for tickets and Book
return
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returns
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 was available. Between
Reading
Correct article usage
the Reading
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room
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 and
Electronics
Correct article usage
the Electronics
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section
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, there was
Adult
Correct article usage
an Adult
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fiction
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books
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 shelf.
Similarly
Linking Words
, between
Reception
Correct article usage
the Reception
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 and
Children's
Correct article usage
the Children's
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 corridor, there
was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
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 Adult
non
Use the right word
non-fiction
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fiction
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books
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are
Verb problem
apply
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kept. There was
the
Correct article usage
an
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 arrangement of Tables and chairs at the centre for the visitors and readers. Over the years, the library floor plan has changed drastically
Linking Words
whereas
Punctuation problem
, whereas
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Fiction
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books
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 and storytelling events
are conducted
Verb problem
apply
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have replaced
electric
Correct article usage
the electric
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 devices lab.
Lecture
Correct article usage
The lecture
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room
Use synonyms
 is present on the right corner
and
Punctuation problem
, and
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likewise
Linking Words
 enquiry desk was replaced with
Cafeteria
Correct article usage
the Cafeteria
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.
Separate
Correct article usage
A separate
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 cabin is provided for
Computer
Correct article usage
the Computer
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room
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 near the entrance
replacing
Punctuation problem
, replacing
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reading
Correct article usage
the reading
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room
Use synonyms
.
Inbetween
Correct your spelling
Between
Cafe
Correct article usage
the Cafe
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 and
presentation
Correct article usage
the presentation
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section
Use synonyms
,
self service
Use the right word
self-service
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 machines,
Information
Correct article usage
an Information
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 desk and
Adult
Correct article usage
an Adult
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fiction
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books
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section
Use synonyms
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
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 available.
Overall
Linking Words
, there are tremendous fluctuations in the
designing
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design
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 of the library
including
Punctuation problem
, including
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addition
Correct article usage
the addition
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 of more comfortable spaces for
sofa
Correct article usage
a sofa
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 and
cafe
Correct article usage
a cafe
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.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words section, room, fiction, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • library
  • plan
  • floor
  • layout
  • space
  • area
  • room
  • wall
  • shelf
  • desk
  • entrance
  • exit
  • seat
  • chair
  • table
  • desk
  • computer
  • screen
  • printer
  • self-checkout
  • reception
  • help
  • kid
  • children
  • reading
  • quiet
  • study
  • group
  • room
  • cafe
  • toilet
  • restroom
  • lift
  • stair
  • ramp
  • access
  • sign
  • map
  • signage
  • direction
  • wide
  • open
  • flow
  • move
  • change
  • compare
  • old
  • new
  • today
  • twenty years
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